Second Toon in the project

[kewlpack]

I haven't gotten final approval on the toons - but here's the second one. For your enjoyment... (?) The client's vision was hard to get to paper. Remember these are only sketches at this point.

Two aborigines imagining what they could do with their Boomerangs... kinda funny. One guy certainly has "greater expectations".

http://www.kewlpack.com/misc_files/other/imaginethepossibilities.jpg

I hate to shrink these down so much - some of it gets lost in teeny details. What do ya think? 8)
~A~

[Crunchyriff]

I'm with candidate #2.... that guy has got vision...

[reverbbb]

I love your work. I never realized that you were such a good freehand artist. You have a lot of great ideas.

The faces make it hard for me to imagine them as aborigines. Perhaps you can recess their eyes a little and widen their faces. They could use a little more bushier hair.

I don't mean to be critical, but you asked 'what do ya think?'. Just some friendly suggestions.

http://members.tripod.com/siekman/man.jpg - Note: you will need to cut and paste this link since they are blocking remote hyperlinks.

http://www.outback-guide.info/p/allgem/big/aborign2.jpg

http://www.outback-guide.info/p/allgem/big/dance.jpg

Also, Ayers Rock is perhaps Australia's most recognizable landmark:

http://members.tripod.com/siekman/ayers2.gif - Note: you will need to cut and paste this link since they are blocking remote hyperlinks.

[kewlpack]

Thanks for the suggestions bro. I appreciate it.

Aborigines are hard to deal with because they are so unusual looking. I wasn't sure about the faces yet either. I do like the stripes of paint on the one pic. Hmmm that would be an easy addition.

There's already a lot going on in the toon so I have to be careful not to overwork it.

~A~